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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-04-04 05:41 PM



My fingers trace the turn
of your lips -

This alone could be enough.

Untill our lips meet.

And then I know...there is always more.




© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-04-04 05:44 PM


Lovely...the anticipation can be delicious.  James
cinnamongirl
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2 posted 2003-04-04 05:52 PM


Such sweetness in the touch, the desire, and in knowing that even more awaits.

Beautiful, sensual poem... wow.

Thank you...

Love,
Moca

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-04-04 06:00 PM



...there is always more.

always . . .  nicely done Ericc - always lovely . . .  xxoo

Enchantress
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4 posted 2003-04-04 07:18 PM


Oooh yessss....there's always more.
Love this...Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Margherita
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5 posted 2003-04-05 04:03 AM


Your poem speaks so graciously of a promise. Your words confer a halo of beautiful sacredness to what will come ....
Love, Margherita

Sunnyone
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6 posted 2003-04-05 07:20 AM


What a wonderful and hopeful write this is!!
And I have a feeling that there really will be more!!  

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Sunshine
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7 posted 2003-04-05 07:39 AM



There had better be more....

I've got to quit reading you in the morning...
I'm ruined for the rest of the day!

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

vandana
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8 posted 2003-04-05 05:34 PM


enjoyed
Startime55
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9 posted 2003-04-05 06:51 PM


Ah....just the beginning is that gentle touch....enough to start the flames reaching higher....Magnificent.
garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-04-06 02:52 PM


Oh yes, Eric!!

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2003-04-06 03:28 PM


enjoyed your words this afternoon

M

Patricia
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12 posted 2003-04-06 07:49 PM


There is always more to explore when it's right.

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