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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2003-04-04 01:02 PM



It is that you remain in each heart beat
it is that I wear upon my soul, the imprint of your feet
footsteps left in retrospect to trace
a remembrance of time, place
whispers that echo still
of a love that never will
be erased with ever crashing wave
of this ache, eternal slave
and would I, could I, have it any other way
could I, would I, have voice to say
“ you love, my dearest treasure, rare gift, guiltless pleasure
are what was, what is , what shall be,
all things precious in this world for me”

perhaps when, if only, then, your heart might come to know
how much is meant in my, “ I love you so”......


~SEA~

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1 posted 2003-04-04 01:06 PM


Beautiful!!
You have been missed!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

OLIAS
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2 posted 2003-04-04 01:17 PM


Wonderful, penned with great emotion, gives me a tingle, thank you for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

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3 posted 2003-04-04 02:09 PM


nice write, I enjoyed this
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4 posted 2003-04-04 03:04 PM


As always a treat to read your thoughts.....thank you for sharing dear Sea

((hugs))
Charisma

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5 posted 2003-04-04 03:34 PM



And SEA comes in,
salting words throughout
the blue halls on waves of delight...

'bout TIME you got back in here little one!

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

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6 posted 2003-04-04 05:09 PM


Hello Sea...you say a lot when you say I love you...James
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7 posted 2003-04-04 05:45 PM


whispers that echo still
of a love that never will
be erased with ever crashing wave
of this ache, eternal slave
and would I, could I, have it any other way
could I, would I, have voice to say

“ you love, my dearest treasure, rare gift, guiltless pleasure

===================================

Lookie here...I see someone found her muse..and them some
very very cool write girlie...very cool indeed.


nothing like "guiltless pleasure" to inspire us

"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel


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8 posted 2003-04-04 06:24 PM


lovely
SEA
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9 posted 2003-04-04 06:38 PM


Thank you all very much, I know I've been gone, but I do peek in and read as often as I can. Life has been very busy for me lately. I hope to get back in here and do much more reading and replying. I've missed you all very much!
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10 posted 2003-04-04 07:09 PM


This should be made into a Hallmark SEA ~ Such a beautiful write.  Bonnie
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11 posted 2003-04-04 07:38 PM


Help! I have been swept away by SEA's words once again! Love this. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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12 posted 2003-04-04 10:01 PM




(smiles) Oh Susan, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I always love reading your gems as all the facets reflect the love from your heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-04-2003 10:02 PM).]

Larry C
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13 posted 2003-04-04 10:45 PM


Sue,
You sweep me off my feet with your romantic flare...more, please!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Aenimal
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14 posted 2003-04-04 10:54 PM


Hey Sue! Where you been hiding? Sorry i've actually been meaning to write but im horrible at emails hope everythigns well and you'll be back more now!?

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