Open Poetry #25 |
Spring's Frozen Tears |
Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Spring locked in silence Ice storm's frigid aftermath Gardens shine in weep Sprouts become green popsicles Frozen liquid smooth . . . Chris Barker April 2003 ~~~~~~~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautiful! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Very descriptive for such few lines, a snap shot in perfection. Thank you for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yep! That is exactly how I feel about what I see outside my window! You captured it perfectly! Love & Light, Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
SEA, OLIAS, and Linda, thankyou all. Yes, Linda I suppose you know all too well as I do about the damage done from last evening's ice storm. My garden looks so sad. ~ "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my. Oh my oh myohmy!!!!! Look what you did! You took a challenge and swept it up into a most wonderful Tanka! I could squeeze the puddin' out of you! This is just wonderful! I am so PROUD of you!!!!! IWIHWT!!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou dear Karilea "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Yay! We had a blizzard here a couple of weeks ago and all the plants became lime popsicles but now it is all warm here and we got daffodils blooming, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love the picture too, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nightshade Well done, enjoyed. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah & Seymour - thankyou dear poets! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Whoohooo!!! Beautiful.. beautiful!! Look at you little sister! You not only met the challenge but took off and ran with it! And Karilea is 'bout to squeeze the juice right outta ya! *Nancy throws pens up into the air, stomping her foot doing her best Scarlett O'Hara impession* ~Love ya, and miss ya, hugs, Teed~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Chris..but don't worry your garden will "spring" back.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Nancylee & sorpio - awww...thankyou both and hugs!! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I loved it Nightshade. Never be normal! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Wind. I am pleased that you enjoyed this. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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