Open Poetry #25 |
Twisted Poetry |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A sonnet is fourteen lines in any of several fixed verse or rhyme schemes, characteristically expressing a single theme or Idea. So for an exercise I took a simple set of fourteen lines as a starting place, And twisted it’s shape. Follow along, if you care to… ~Body of a Sonnet~ I hear her foot fall, Striding in heels of black. Coming down the hall, I’m taken quite aback; Leather torso filling Ample bosom spilling Over for eyes delight, Carried by legs in silk Face white as milk, Vision that last into the night I hear the passing footfalls As they go quickly passed my door, Another voice to her calls, Still alone as I was before. ~Twisted Body of a Sonnet~ I hear her foot falling, in heels of black. She’s Striding Coming down the darken hall, Seeing her nothing of lack; More filling Leather torso with spilling Ample bosom for delight, legs in silk Face as milk, Vision that last into night the passing I hear footfalls as they go quickly passed my door, I know, Another voice to her calls, she answers him Still alone, Alone as I was before. ~Twisting Further~ Noise on the wood steps out back I hear her foot falling, in Shades of black. She’s Striding Seeing there’s nothing she lacks; Coming down the darken sprawl, Cruel Riding, Of taking them one and all. Ample bosom for delight, pale as milk, Vision that last into night Leather torso over fills, legs in silk panties of the finest frills Longing fiery eye that kills Lovers force, images of her lusting that spills to the ugly dark hiding lost of choice, lost of chance, but still abiding. Lost fire. I hear footfalls as they go quickly passed my door, I know, Another voice to her calls, she answers him Still alone, Alone as I was before. Gloom a little something unearthed from past writings |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A little something? Sigh. Teach me. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Your talent is overwhelming.. Susan |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow! I loved the twisted ones....very very cool |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Just goes tashowya! The proof is in the poetry! You have one mighty fine, versatile mind! Thanks for the lesson, Dear Professor! Warm hugs, EA |
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