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Open Poetry #25

Letting Go

LastMoments
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 92

0 posted 2003-04-03 10:24 PM

My eyes taken by the shadows
That play with their emotion
As I fall to my nightmares
The black box inside my mind

The ache won't go away
A pounding emotional wound
That bleeds to names uncommon
Continuing to leech its life

Illusions torment my soul
Preventing me to heal
Instead I break inside myself
A puppet to my own strings

Control seems out of touch
Care I cannot feel
A drone to all around me
A pigment to my feelings

Holding away, just letting go

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

1 posted 2003-04-04 11:33 AM

A pigment to my feelings

I liked this line, though i'm trying to figure out what it should mean...

luvlorn322
Junior Member

since 2002-10-28

Posts 43

2 posted 2003-04-04 05:40 PM

i liked this, very morose, but well expressed.

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