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JP
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since 1999-05-25
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0 posted 2003-04-03 03:36 PM



Desert sand
billowing incessantly
coating sweaty skin
in gritty irritation.

Heated air
tinged with smoke
from spent rounds
and rocket's tail.

Months spent
endlessly training
focusing on this day
this horrible day.

Duty done,
honor is satisfied
country is served
freedom now reigns.

Desert sand
billowing incessantly
covering cooling skin
of our hallowed dead.



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1 posted 2003-04-04 06:52 AM



Thank you, JP....

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