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Open Poetry #25

Everything Surrender

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-04-03 10:44 AM

Everything you give
And when you surrender
everything to me
My heart is ready to set free
And is love
Everything surrenders
you give yourself to me
And drift away
To the heart
That surrender everything
Everything surrenders
But love
Now I got an answer
To my question
You give your heart and soul
Live forever
Even when you surrender
your love to me
All the songs were on a memories
And when the ocean was dried
you surrender everything to me
Everything surrends
to me
Now
Iam everything to
I surrender my love
and heart too to you
Everything surrenders

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-04-03 10:46 AM

Enjoyed!

Warm hugs,
EA

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-04-03 11:21 AM

Vandana! You're singing again!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-04-03 11:29 AM

Sweet surrenders..
*s
M

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

4 posted 2003-04-03 12:42 PM

Well done..

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2003-04-03 01:11 PM

Simply Beautiful!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-04-03 01:17 PM

wow vandana! a great write! I feel it!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-04-03 01:21 PM

Vandana, this is beautiful. It really is
like a song of Surrendered Love. I
really enjoyed reading it.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-04-04 10:16 PM

(big hugggsssss) Oh Vandana, this is lovely, sweet friend, I am happy to see you posting again, yay! (sigh) I long for the day I can give all my heart to some special love too, I know this yearning, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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