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not the same |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186
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i chain smoke cigarettes while i pace around this tomb i think i'll set my bed on fire i don't wanna sleep alone anymore i've gone through all the channels of course there's nothin' on i turn up the radio seems they only play our songs anymore only me to keep me company and i know everything i have to say man i've heard it all before it's always all the same and as i pace around i realize i've changed since you've been gone i'm just not the same i never did understand how i became your friend or how i became your man before you went away and i'm afraid i've changed i am not the same would you still fall in love with the man i am today? if you were here what would you say? that i'm losin' weight and fading away? i need to eat some more well i'm livin' off of caffiene tonight i'm goin' back to Nashville to relive another daydream we'll exchange vows in that motel where river phoenix filmed this thing called love our honeymoon of roadtrips you'll start feeling homesick to sit atop the sand dunes and listen to the waves break yea man i know all about homesick too and as i drift away laying on the couch i realize i've changed i'm just not the same i'd love to understand how i became your friend how i became your man so i could take you by your hand and do those things again cause i'm afraid i've changed i know i'm not the same i wonder if you'd even fall in love with the man i am today... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wonder that too, only as a female *s "our honeymoon of roadtrips" a nice line hugs and a ~smile~ if needed M |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Blues for life, much enjoyed thank you for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem would make a terrific country song! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
T McCoy...Yes, a definite song in here of the blues...well done. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There's my old buddy! Welcome home lovie---and a sad write, but have a hug on me...may your heart heal soon.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG Anthony - this is just . . . hurts - I know about this - I do - Im sorry . . . lovely writing here - you blew me away xxoo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
T McCoy The real T McCoy wouldn't write that, LOL enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yep, you are singing the blues in this one. Sorry if it is from your real life tune. Nice to meet you, anyway.  |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Been a while.....was VERY surprised to see a post from you....Hope life has been treating you better since you originally wrote this one. You've been missed here in our circle of friends....but, well, so have I it seems!!!! Help bring a bit of light my way if you could and I will double it back at ya!!!! Loved the poem the first time around though never got to tell you.....Take care! KISSes, J  |
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llgg New Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 1 |
Hi Tony -- It's LL..... I read this and was a little surprised. Actually came onto this site just to show a friend your pic b/c we were talking about old times. Connor is beautiful. Take care. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ea puts a good point lol ARCTIC WIND |
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