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Silver_Tryst
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since 2003-03-10
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MT

0 posted 2003-04-02 08:49 PM


Flowers slowly open there petals to the falling rain drops,
Just the immense beauty of flowers is simply breath taking,
It only take a moment to watch a flower bloom,
Just one shattering impulse and your heart stops,

Flowers are both relaxing and soothing,
A simple fragrance and turn a thought to a fantasy,
Now sitting upon a window sill having a new outlook on life,
All because that beautiful flower was so moving,

IM not sure how to get across how flowers make me feel,
Maybe the way they slowly sway with a gentle summer's breeze,
Or quite simply the way the elegant smells can calm my tortured soul,
Just you yourself take a look and you will know it real,

© Copyright 2003 Shayne Kenichi - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-04-03 05:08 AM


Wish they opened a little faster and you could watch the process...at least we can see the results...James
Rdz9
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since 2003-03-16
Posts 142
MT, USA
2 posted 2003-04-29 03:38 PM


Nice work Shayne.

One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world...

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