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All in a days’ dream
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All in a days’ dream |
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sperarifraai Member
since 2003-03-06
Posts 65Ireland |
Radiant sky Sunlight in the woods Menacing sweetness The trees conspire To harm me in their arms Afraid of summer, woods conspire Remembering I can’t It’s the way you look at it Just for a while these trees where still Just for a while the frost froze forever We sat motionless just for a while The only thing that moved was the tormentless burn of the fire For a while we sat For a while you knew me And it was like you realised it forever Just for a while it was like what it was I see you on the horizon as the sun comes up I wave as your sillouhette joins with the lost ghosts in my soul Don’t let me forget your face Sperari |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to your yearning and missing of the lovely face but know the sun shines because that special someone wishes you the best and will certainly never sacrifice your memory! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sperari, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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prof.pishnu Junior Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 21 |
ahh i like this and can very much relate to it in my current state lol. Always find that although you can know someone so well, you never quite know it yourself so in essence you don't know them ahhhh lol then the moment comes  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
God that's beautiful writing. I know it's over. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful! Perfectly beautiful! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
bittersweet...very good |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Sad and wistful.....Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Great poem it got my vote Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Some day's dream, this was. Very good writing.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I love poetry about the woods....This was a really nice dream!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I just loved the ending line! |
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