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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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You touched me in those quiet places that hide, you touched me gently until I cried no more, please, I am already down on my knees begging for mercy and wanting more than my share. I am greedy for your gentlest passionate touch, the uplifting power of Love, the heat of heartbeat that pounds the flesh soul and mind and leaves me begging for more. I didn't know I was starving until now. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow! How much passion here! That fatal touch contains wonderful promises ... no need to beg, just TAKE and GIVE. Enjoyed this very much. Love, Margherita  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling in thank you, Margherita. |
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Seraphine_CoB Junior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 14LONDON, UK |
personal, pretty without rambling this would make a really good song Sephie xxxxxxx |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I didn't know I was starving until now. ****************************** Such a lovely poem with such a sad ending... or is it??? Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH WOW Kacy!! Achingly sensual..oooh myyyy...I love this!! Very beautifully expressed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Kacy....last night you were eating pizza, now you're starving. Hmmmmm. Did Dominoes get a hot new delivery guy???  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."I didn't know I was starving until now!" Whew! I get the picture. I need a fan because I am getting the vapors!  Love & Light, Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at your reply Duncan. Maybe it was just a pizza dream? Glad you ladies and gents enjoyed this. There's only so much pain and agony I can post before I have to console myself with some tender passionate thoughts. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
the ending doesnt sound sad to me - I know that feeling - & its nice to always want more - what a passionate write - wow |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
wow, it takes great willpower to say no to a good stuff...i won't even bother trying..  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
welcome, dreambuilder! what a great name! vandana, thank s! kaile, no need to say no |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kacy - I love this - (I love all your writings) but here: I didn't know I was starving until now. Is a rebirth - nice job . . . xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
they say you don't miss what you've never had...I totally agree. Good writing Kacy! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kacy, now you know this hopeless romantic loves this one. It really is romantic, sensual, and just plain HOT. Whew!!! Heart Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-03-2003 01:27 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*s M you've said it all |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh wow...this is incredible! Great job. Eric |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What, you're giving Ericc a run for the sensuous? This is wonderful. I wish I knew where you folks dig this stuff up....  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at your reply, Karilea. Thanks everyone, for helping me paint some warm reds over these blue pages. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
.... nice touch .... (running to cupboards in sensuous pain) .... out of breath! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Oh you need to get out of my head!!! I loved it. Susan |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Craig, I'm smiling here. Sorry to cause pain, but sensuous pain? LOL, that's the only acceptable kind. Susan, glad you could relate to this.  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hmmm, who wouldn't be greedy for such as this? Doggone lovely longing. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanx wranx. Greediness isn't always a bad trait. |
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