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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-04-02 04:26 PM




You touched me
in those quiet places
that hide,
you touched me gently
until I cried

no more, please,
I am already down on my knees
begging for mercy
and wanting more
than my share.

I am greedy
for your gentlest
passionate touch,
the uplifting power
of Love,
the heat of heartbeat
that pounds the flesh
soul and mind
and leaves me
begging
for more.

I didn't know
I was starving
until
now.

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2003-04-02 04:35 PM


Wow! How much passion here! That fatal touch contains wonderful promises ... no need to beg, just TAKE and GIVE.
Enjoyed this very much.
Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2003-04-02 04:41 PM


Smiling in thank you, Margherita.
Seraphine_CoB
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3 posted 2003-04-02 05:04 PM


personal, pretty without rambling

this would make a really good song

Sephie
xxxxxxx

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4 posted 2003-04-02 06:24 PM


I didn't know
I was starving
until
now.
******************************

Such a lovely poem with such a sad ending... or is it???

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

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5 posted 2003-04-02 06:31 PM


OH WOW Kacy!!
Achingly sensual..oooh myyyy...I love this!!
Very beautifully expressed!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2003-04-02 06:40 PM


Kacy....last night you were eating pizza, now you're starving.  Hmmmmm.  Did Dominoes get a hot new delivery guy???  
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7 posted 2003-04-02 06:41 PM


..."I didn't know I was starving until now!"

Whew! I get the picture. I need a fan because I am getting the vapors!



Love & Light,
Linda

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8 posted 2003-04-02 07:10 PM


LOL at your reply Duncan. Maybe it was just a pizza dream?
Glad you ladies and gents enjoyed this. There's only so much pain and agony I can post before I have to console myself with some tender passionate thoughts.

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9 posted 2003-04-02 07:16 PM


enjoyed
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10 posted 2003-04-02 07:18 PM


the ending doesnt sound sad to me - I know that feeling - & its nice to always want more - what a passionate write - wow
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11 posted 2003-04-02 07:20 PM


wow, it takes great willpower to say no to a good stuff...i won't even bother trying..
Midnitesun
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12 posted 2003-04-02 07:23 PM


welcome, dreambuilder! what a great name!

vandana, thank s!

kaile, no need to say no

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13 posted 2003-04-03 01:11 PM



Kacy - I love this - (I love all your writings) but here:

I didn't know
I was starving
until
now.

Is a rebirth - nice job . . . xxoo

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14 posted 2003-04-03 01:19 PM


they say you don't miss what you've never had...I totally agree. Good writing Kacy!
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15 posted 2003-04-03 01:27 PM


Kacy, now you know this hopeless romantic loves this one. It really is romantic, sensual, and just plain HOT.  Whew!!!

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-03-2003 01:27 PM).]

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16 posted 2003-04-03 01:58 PM


*s
M

you've said it all

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17 posted 2003-04-03 03:38 PM


Oh wow...this is incredible!
Great job.
Eric

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18 posted 2003-04-03 08:23 PM



What, you're giving Ericc a run for the
sensuous?  This is wonderful.  
I wish I knew where you folks dig
this stuff up....

Midnitesun
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19 posted 2003-04-03 08:27 PM


LOL at your reply, Karilea.
Thanks everyone, for helping me paint some warm reds over these blue pages.

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20 posted 2003-04-04 10:42 AM


.... nice touch ....

    (running to cupboards in sensuous pain)
            .... out of breath!

Susan Caldwell
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21 posted 2003-04-04 12:05 PM


Oh you need to get out of my head!!!

I loved it.


Susan

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22 posted 2003-04-04 12:23 PM


Craig, I'm smiling here. Sorry to cause pain, but sensuous pain? LOL, that's the only acceptable kind.

Susan, glad you could relate to this.

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23 posted 2003-04-05 12:36 PM


Hmmm, who wouldn't be greedy for such as this?

Doggone lovely longing.

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24 posted 2003-04-05 09:02 AM


Thanx wranx. Greediness isn't always a bad trait.
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