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Listening to Purple
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Listening to Purple |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Turn your head & do not speak lest again I am made weak caught on tides & washed ashore begging for your love once more Pretend somehow you do not see this wretched, desperate need in me to know at last your sweet affection without the fear of your rejection Please be gentle, please... be kind to this fragile heart of mine do not sing those tender songs that lead me captive all day long Turn your head & do not speak lest again I am made weak caught upon the tides once more lost along love's lonely shores... Sunkissed. [This message has been edited by Sunkissed (03-22-2003 10:55 AM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is so tender and beautiful. Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this is so lovely...very romantic. ~Smiles & Hugs Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
so so sad........i feel like crying right now myself |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is a soft and tender write. Enjoyed the feel of the words. Nicely done. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Even though the sadness in this touched my heart, it is written so beautifully. I really enjoyed reading it.  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you Eric, Nancy, Inkedgoddess, WhiteRose, & Ethel for reading with your hearts... hugs to you all, Sunkissed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I truly enjoyed this lyrical love song... Love & Light, Earth Angel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is so very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way in hope soon your heart is gently touched by the love you deserve and you happily sing on the shores! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
... ~beautiful~ .. and I love the title. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
EA, Noah, & Chanson, thank you for taking the time to read with your hearts as well... Hugs all around!  Sunkissed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have a purple poem or two...don't know what I would do without them... or this... hugs... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sun - this is just lovely - and yes - I think we can all relate to that longing . . . xxoo |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Yep |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Another beautiful write my dear. All good wishes. ThisDiamond |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A tender write. enjoyed muchly  Maree. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is sad but intensely beautiful. You have my vote. Love, Margherita |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ah very nice!!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A splendid write Sunkissed... Smiles2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
This poem sends me to memories of sitting on the beach under a purple, moonless sky. Sitting there doing some soul searching. God knows I have done this many times LOL Beautiful writing |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunKissed~ This is a magnificent piece~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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pearl6884 Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 72California coast |
So heartfelt, tender and touching! *applause* *To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...* |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
So beautiful. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
So very romantic and well written. I loved it. Love is so addictive that you just cant resist. I liked this style of writing, good! a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. [This message has been edited by Hypnosis (03-25-2003 05:36 PM).] |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
The title beckoned me and I'm glad I read...soo romantic and beautiful. I really enjoyed the read.  *Krista Knutson* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunkissed - you write this with so much from the inside of you. Sad but beautiful at the same time. My vote is cast for this... BC |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
You've written very eloquent in this poem, as has already been stated, very sad yet beautiful. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sun - this one - you are in my head here missy - lovely writing - love the sunkissed at the end - is perfect! Got my vote for sure xxoo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Powerful.. Susan |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you, everyone for taking the time to read, appreciate, and feel, these words. Love to you all, Sunkissed. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very happy that I stepped out of my comfort zone and ventured into Open. Beautiful, absolutely. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Absolutely, a book poem. ESPECIALLY LIKED THIS: Turn your head & do not speak lest again I am made weak caught upon the tides once more lost along love's lonely shores... * |
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