Warm Sands of the Shore, They are No More

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Open Poetry #25

Warm Sands of the Shore, They are No More

Quiet Acquiescence
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 70
somewhere out here

0 posted 2003-02-18 06:51 PM

Oh how I miss you so.
My true love for you
Will you ever know?
I don't know how I get by.
Day after day I just want to cry.
Cry because I miss you so
At some point I must
Let the tears flow.

I can't believe I'm living without you.
When I said good-bye
I didn't know it'd be this painful.
The long waits, a broken heart….
Thoughts of you in my mind reign full.

Mommy is this what love’s touch feels like?
Is this how it’s supposed to be?
Endless rainy days without my love,
No chance of finding glee.

I can’t take it anymore!
My mind keeps going back
To the times we spent by the shore.
Talked and laughed together is all we did.
But I had never felt those feelings,
Never, ever, before.

The cool water touched our toes.
The warm sands caressed our feet.
I listened to you talk,
Your voice sounding oh so sweet.

I know I sound pitiful,
But I really do miss you.
I’ll wait patiently though.
Thoughts of you and I,
I will not reminisce.
It pains me.
For it’s those thoughts of us together
That I do truly miss.

~*~Courage is wings~*~

[This message has been edited by Quiet Acquiescence (02-19-2003 06:21 PM).]

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

1 posted 2003-02-18 07:31 PM

Ahhh yes to lose someone we love. There remains an emptiness and all we have left are these memories...I loved it! i did i did!!!!!!!

Quiet Acquiescence
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 70
somewhere out here

2 posted 2003-02-18 09:08 PM

Why thank you Albert J. Allie ,thank you very much.

~*~me~*~

~*~Courage is wings~*~

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2003-03-31 09:56 PM

You echo what's in my own heart..... Wonderful write!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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