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Open Poetry #25

The essence of love

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-02-16 02:00 PM

Is it your charming smile
which makes my eyes glow
or the touch of your hands
that makes you worthwhile?

Is it the adorable sight
of you resting in my arms
or is it the tenderness we share
that makes me go to great heights?

All together, tiny events compose a song
a melody, never played this strong
Arousing a feeling, as 'love' it is known
Sense it powering up and notice how it grows

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-16 02:31 PM

good poem.. Wish I could say more. But.. Its just a good poem.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

2 posted 2003-02-17 10:10 PM

its the little things isn't it. nice write.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

3 posted 2003-02-17 10:34 PM

I love here what you have composed from your heart...

All together, tiny events compose a song
a melody, never played this strong
Arousing a feeling, as 'love' it is known
Sense it powering up and notice how it grows

WONDERFUL READ!!!!!! I enjoyed it. I did I did I did....

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-03-31 09:53 PM

This is wonderfully sweet....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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