Open Poetry #25 |
Puppy Love |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
"Our Sara" Four legs...big paws...a fuzzy ball of fur With energy that keeps me on my toes You play...you jump...a never stopping blur And how you do it, heaven only knows! Soft eyes...sweet face...you've stolen this poor heart Especially when you take a break to sleep You dream...you run...you talk in puppy barks And somewhere into doggy-land you creep... But soon...you wake...your noises fill the air You nudge me with a gentle puppy shove Outside? Yes, please...the world awaits you there And I've become a willing slave to you and puppy love! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Aww Sunnyone, This is such a sweet write. What a beautiful German Sheperd. Looks like he/she has sort of an Elvis type curl to his puppy grin. Enjoyed this. Chris oops, I just realized HER name...sorry! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- that perches in the soul.... -Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by Nightshade (04-02-2003 01:19 PM).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you, Nightshade, and you know, you're right about the little curl!!! We just brought Sara home on Sunday, which was Mother's Day here in jolly ol' England! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Zoe Alexander New Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 1 |
Hey sister-girl ... this was sweet -- can't wait to meet your beautiful new "baby." Hope you're up and around again very very soon. Love, Zoe |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny she's a sweet one,for sure. I like the note about the elvis smile. Isn't it great that any life event can fall so nicely into a poem? Sandra |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Sunny, I love this. I know exactly what you mean about "puppy love". My little doggy's name is Scooter and he's my baby. He is almost 16 months old now. He was born in December a year ago. See, I talk about him likes he's my little kid. LOL Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!!! (giggles in delight) Awwwwwwww, Sara definitely has an Elvis smile, tell me, can she dance the Hound Dog? (giggles) This is soooooooo adorable, sweet friend, and so is Sara, yay, I used to have kittens when I was a boy and wish I could have a new one now, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sunny - this is so sweet - I loved it! Just lost my choc lab - means much to me - thank you . . . xxoo |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Awwwwwwwww Sunny so sweet.....can see why you fell in puppy love ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very nice! Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...almost makes me want a puppy...but no...James |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny Baby Sara is just beautiful and we didn't have a baby shower to welcome her into your life. Well written words and I know that she will be your best buddy and a little sister to Bess. Happy Mother's Day! |
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