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bslicker
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0 posted 2003-04-02 12:23 PM



Missing Pieces

When not with you
the heart is missing
your words
your touch
for you are smart
beyond our beauty
i miss you so much
with only images that are left
not being there with you
hoping that your missing me
that time will bridge the gap
of never having to miss you again
for no one
yes no one will ever replace
the love tucked
away within the heart
just because we are apart
missing you always
and forever
till one day we can be
together
if only within our dreams
your always there
as every day,
every minute,
every hour passes
without you
yes,
still missing you


Bernie





A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

© Copyright 2003 Bernard Slicker - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-04-02 12:26 PM


Bernie - I know this all too well:

for no one
yes no one will ever replace
the love tucked
away within the heart

never will it fade . . .  this is lovely xxoo

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-04-02 01:10 PM


very touching write here Bernie
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3 posted 2003-04-02 01:14 PM


Ahh...very nice Bernie. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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4 posted 2003-04-02 01:22 PM


thank you littlewing
it never will

passing shadows, thank you for reading

nightshade ty for reading also.


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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5 posted 2003-04-02 08:19 PM


Bernie - sensitive write...

BC

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6 posted 2003-04-02 09:04 PM


ty BC

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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