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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-04-02 10:45 AM


Freed

Once caught in a spider web
A butterfly struggled to free herself
With the web poorly built
It looses the grip on her
And she flies towards
A new horizon

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-04-02 11:23 AM

very interesting, I read this one on many levels
thought provoking
concise
vivid imagery

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littlewing
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2 posted 2003-04-02 11:38 AM

Amature - this is amazing! Ahhh I love stories of freedom and this . . . just flies  xxoo
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-04-02 11:41 AM

...a freedom earned...

Wonderful little write!

Peace, Love & Light,
Earth Angel
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