Open Poetry #25 |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I am shadow halved and scraped over sorrows feast battle slowly beckons will this be my forever how did my black ever become so grey? such fuel to my skies anger i'm in begging position hands pale and cupped half of what i thought i was fully incapable of dissappearing this ache a rainbow assortment of knowledge wrapped in weakness. |
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edh Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 111 |
knowledge can certainly be wrapped in weakness maybe perhaps unwrapped with strength. Greater than all knowledge. Sympathetic tears and the wings of a butterfly. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If I many, I would like to echo edh's reply! Hugs from the heart, Earth Angel |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Gemma, Humility and surrender is all it takes. So difficult to get there. May you receive fully. I loved what Ed had to say, too. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. "Desiderata" [This message has been edited by regards2you (04-02-2003 10:24 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop An incisive write, enjoyed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi little Gemma I think I'll echo what edh said, too. He said it so perfectly. You know, you really can put your feelings down so well. . . Hey, is your computer fixed yet? hope so. I've been missing your poetry and replies around here. Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gemma - a real beauty here - as always but here you made me see this: i'm in begging position hands pale and cupped lovely write . . . xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah does this mean you're back permanentely because you better be..I need to read more like this to know I'm not completely insane thinking and writing the things i do. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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