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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-04-02 10:13 AM



I am shadow halved
and scraped over sorrows feast

battle slowly beckons
will this be my forever

how did my black ever become so grey?
such fuel to my skies anger

i'm in begging position
hands pale and cupped

half of what i thought i was
fully incapable of dissappearing

this ache a rainbow assortment
of knowledge wrapped in weakness.

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edh
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since 2003-03-26
Posts 111

1 posted 2003-04-02 10:18 AM


knowledge can certainly be wrapped in weakness maybe perhaps unwrapped with strength.

Greater than all knowledge.  Sympathetic tears and the wings of a butterfly.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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2 posted 2003-04-02 10:22 AM


If I many, I would like to echo edh's reply!

Hugs from the heart,
Earth Angel

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
3 posted 2003-04-02 10:23 AM




Gemma,

Humility and surrender is all it takes. So difficult to get there. May you receive fully. I loved what Ed had to say, too.


Hugs, Pat  



..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (04-02-2003 10:24 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-04-02 10:25 AM


gemjop
An incisive write, enjoyed.

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-04-02 10:42 AM


Hi little Gemma  
I think I'll echo what edh said, too. He
said it so perfectly. You know, you really
can put your feelings down so well.

.
.
Hey, is your computer fixed yet?  hope so.
I've been missing your poetry and replies around here.

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
6 posted 2003-04-02 12:35 PM


gemma - a real beauty here - as always but here you made me see this:

i'm in begging position
hands pale and cupped

lovely write . . .  xxoo

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
7 posted 2003-04-02 04:23 PM


Ah  does this mean you're back permanentely because you better be..I need to read more like this to know I'm not completely insane thinking and writing the things i do.
vandana
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8 posted 2003-04-02 07:19 PM


enjoyed
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