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Open Poetry #25
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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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0 posted 2003-04-01 03:38 PM


And I meet you
Open -
A desire winged
With hopeless surrender.

I always fly to you.
© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-04-01 05:25 PM

Ericc, this is great, in the 20 or less style. Hard to do, I think.
Sandra
SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
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2 posted 2003-04-01 05:57 PM

I like your work, just discovered you.
Nice.

SG
Pascal
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3 posted 2003-04-01 05:58 PM

Very nice work Ericc - great write!

Pascal

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-04-01 06:48 PM

Beautiful and a twenty or less also!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

dreambuilder
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caddyshack
5 posted 2003-04-01 08:05 PM

well done - enjoyed
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