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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-03-31 03:26 PM

I thirst in the absence
of your voice.

The wind proves not enough
to carry your song.

The night is soundless.

There is liquid only in
your voice.

And yet when I drink from
your lips -
words that remain unspoken.

The wind proves to be your
song.

The night is alive to the sound of its own pleasures.

There is liquid in all that we touch.

And filled by the silence of this love
I thirst no more.

[This message has been edited by Ericc (03-31-2003 10:11 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-03-31 03:38 PM

I think we need a swoon lounge...
just for your poetry...

Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

2 posted 2003-03-31 04:01 PM

Such beauty is
a delight for my spirit.
Loving!!
A warm thank you,
Etain.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2003-03-31 05:29 PM

softly sensual, and so romantic...
No doubt the luckiest love of all. TD

Pascal
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 54
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2003-03-31 05:53 PM

Wonderful write - very beautiful. Amazing talent!

Pascal

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-03-31 09:28 PM

(smiles) Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your beautiful words always make me smile and are aflame with passion! (big hugggsssssss) This is powerfully poignant, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-04-01 08:21 AM

Eric, you fill the night with music ... a voice that dances with the wind .... and you share this dance with infinite beauty.

Wow, Sunshine, you really say it .... a swoon lounge would be appropriate ... for such breathtaking poetry! Thank you for the smile!

Love, Margherita

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-04-01 01:53 PM

Ericc - quite beautiful - I said I wasnt going to click these on anymore . . .

There is liquid only in
your voice.

lovely . . . xxoo

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2003-04-01 05:29 PM

Wow, I was pulled in by the title, but the poem is even better.
Sandra

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

9 posted 2003-04-01 05:55 PM

This is beautiful. A keeper.

SG

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

10 posted 2003-04-01 06:24 PM

I love romantic poems.

lovely.

Sunkissed.

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

11 posted 2003-04-01 08:14 PM

I thirst in the absence
of your voice.

very touching - ty - enjoyed

[This message has been edited by dreambuilder (04-01-2003 08:15 PM).]

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