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Feeling You
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Feeling You |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Feeling You! You display your beauty for me to see and enjoy. I long to merge with you to be One and to feel you. So I walk barefoot on the grass still sparkling with dew. And you wet my feet with your crystal tears of Love. And I inhale the morning air, filling my lungs with your breath, you clean my channels of life providing me with new energy. You show me the infinite Ocean where you surround me in blue and I dance through the waters, weightless, carried by the waves. And I call the joyful dolphins to have fun, sharing in their laughter to feel the touch of magic flowing through the secret depths. Then you lift me up to play among the magnificent clouds, towers of white, soft and bright where I immerse into the Light. I face the Sun, receiving its kiss, and I close my eyes in delight you transform my arms in wings, I fly into the infinity of the Sky. There I join the Angels' choir and in perfect harmony I rejoice and I dance and twirl and dance within Your eternal embrace. Feeling You! Love, Margherita |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is very beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You write from the beauty of your soul...where nothing more beautiful can be found. Love, Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You write beautiful love letters...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautifully written. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! so beautiful! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
A truly uplifitng, beautiful fantasy, that can come close to real sometimes, (well, except for the dolphins) smiling here. This is well written and enjoyed greatly. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
There I join the Angels' choir and in perfect harmony I rejoice and I dance and twirl and dance within Your eternal embrace. This Poem catches my attention  Thomas |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
MARHGERITA!!!! This is amazing: you transform my arms in wings, I fly into the infinity of the Sky. Just lovely - what faith & inspiration! (vote??) xxoo |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - yes, I do like this one very much. You have a poet's heart and a romantic pen... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you poets for stopping in and for your lovely comments. Feeling you! Love, Margherita |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Margherita~ Thanks for sharing with us these beautiful words. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Margherita your poems always bring a smile to these usually frozen lips |
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