Open Poetry #25 |
Recipe |
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Recipe You know how it works It sits there somewhere and cooks in the unexplorable reaches of the mind from a comment casually made a phrase dropped a leaf f a ll ing Even a clichéd line can ante the pot and start simmering the boil Stir it occasionally as needed or raise the ante if you must but don’t watch it too closely Let it brew © 033103 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ahhh, the recipe for a good cup of poem, me thinks. Good to the last drop. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like your definition much better, Krawdad...I just refer to it as percolating... like the earth does.... Gads, I wish this were a book submission..... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You know what they say about a watched pot.. This is very cleverly done.. and much enjoyed by this reader. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Very imaginative, Krawdad. Another outstanding write. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Taking a writing lesson from this one....from the way it's built and painted....been looking at for quite a while and learning little things, and I think I'll just sit here and watch it a while more. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Because what's the use of enjoying a feast unless you let the aroma fill your senses and let that alone tantalize you and then taste the ingredients in a whole new form! (big hugggssssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Excellently steeped! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lesson indeed to all us pot stirrers....to let it brew to get the full flavor. enjoyed the format *s Maureen |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write! much needed! |
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EmbarrassedToBeHere New Member
since 2003-05-07
Posts 2 |
and you sir are not e.e. cummings |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
EmbarrassedToBeHere, you're right, that's Krawdad...no e.e.cummings around this place...maybe you should go look for him elsewhere? |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
EmbarrassedToBeHere...i see why you have that name...it fits you...now come pick on me...not on a real poet...and btw...where is your poetry?...helen |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
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