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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-31 03:33 PM



Remembered

you touch me
places lost
it’s like
you forget
parts until
someone
pays attention
to them
how long
was I
in limbo
misplaced
that just
a touch
has taught
my heart
to breathe



© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Ringo
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1 posted 2003-03-31 03:47 PM


This is very touching, Helen. It seems too long and too far apart that we find these touches.
Great write.

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2 posted 2003-03-31 04:33 PM


Very nice indeed Helen!

Kris

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1slick_lady
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3 posted 2003-03-31 04:37 PM


ringo...thank you so much

chris....welcome home hugs...the romance is back...missed you

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4 posted 2003-03-31 10:59 PM


Helen~ Soft and tender. Enjoyed and thank you for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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