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Love's Fight
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Love's Fight |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US 
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 Waves coming in pulling you under Tears flowing out of my crying eyes Gasps of air swallowed salt water choking lungs Currents sucking strong Trying to steal you away Fear runs rampid Nightmares come true the struggles of survival override death's knock I fight back with love reaching with all my might outstretched arms pull bringing you to my chest No matter the storms that life may bring I will always fight My love will always win Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS [This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-15-2003 06:19 AM).] |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
pretty piece |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Thanks Brad :-) Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah, the ending got me  |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
hey there Dixie Chic! go write one LOL and thank you... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A lovely write  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I like it, Kristie..the message of hope and determination comes through loud and clear...nicely done  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
would still rather love than hate...nice go |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kristie Sue, this is beautiful....the challenge well met, and a very good book submission, too.  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
sweet poem. -majnu |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I fight back with love reaching with all my might outstretched arms pull bringing you to my chest =============================== romantic ride on devotion's tides.. love the pic too well done poetess KS "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
smiling here... regards, sudhir |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Go Female Power! I will prefer it if you come up a title for your poem..you can't possibly call this "Rosepetals Challenge"  ...my vote is casted nonetheless but tell us when you have decided on a title?[This message has been edited by kaile (04-01-2003 10:46 AM).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Chickie! I almost missed this LOL I'm glad I didn't! You as well have met the challange wonderfully You have my vote!Tara "in my field of paper flowers |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kristie Sue...you did a marvelous job with rosepetal's challenge! This is wonderful! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Fantastic writing... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm not sure what the challenge was... but I'm sure I like this writing. *S* Well done! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Thanks :-) I appreciate the votes of confidence....honest :-) Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
I can't think of any good poem titles for this....any ideas??? :-) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lovely! --a challenge well-met! ..."and my love will always win". Love & Light, Linda |
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