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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-03-31 07:12 AM


Where one and one is One

I need no witches broom to fly
Or wings to glory in the sun
I have a secret dream I sigh
That makes the world and I just one.

It is a thing I ask my mind
When up against the world I see
Is it right or is it kind
If I were thee and thee were me.

At first each question was a test
I was not sure the open sore
And then each test was less and less
As one and one became the store.

And now I fly a butterfly
The hues I see are evermore
A rainbows bridge within the sky
This rainbow bridge forevermore.

I do not really fly you see
I live a sort of empathy.



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MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2003-03-31 07:18 AM


May I have the rare honor of being the first to say:  good morning and thank you for the wisdom?  You have words here worth noting (as usual)...

-MVS

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2 posted 2003-03-31 07:23 AM



In wing of flight this empathy
brings you closer, don't you see...
it harbors well the butterfly
it lets us see all, eye to eye...

and it brings a great

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-03-31 07:33 AM


MARK,
Noted with humble thanks.

Sunshine,
Your rays of warmth have lit my day.

Toerag
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4 posted 2003-03-31 07:50 AM


And I thought this was going to be about The University Of Balladeer?..

[This message has been edited by Toerag (03-31-2003 07:59 AM).]

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5 posted 2003-03-31 08:10 AM


And now I fly a butterfly
The hues I see are evermore
A rainbows bridge within the sky
This rainbow bridge forevermore.

I do not really fly you see
I live a sort of empathy.


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'Tis by your gift of metered verse and rhyme ...
you fly on high 'cross silvered sands of time.
Empathy equals esteemed rhyme scheme dreams ...
cadenced themes that take us to exquisite exotic extremes.

Leave the flying to Randy ... you pen the prophetic poetry ...
then ride that dandy dragon to me for the tea and empathy.

and for the *winkies*  LOL


"and when we get to the pearly gates ...
we'll find what we called our sins were just mistakes."

Tom Kimmel


Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-03-31 08:31 AM


Toe,
Balladeers university is a golf school, LOL

JM.
Tea and empathy is that like tea and sympathy, maybe just raspberry tea and you.
WWRS

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2003-03-31 08:35 AM


YOur words float so smoothly and magnificently.
Beautiful -again
LOve you
Liz

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8 posted 2003-03-31 08:45 AM




Sy,

This is truly inspiring and a great reminder for those of us who do live inconsistantly, though the goal may be the golden rule, too often failing to take the time to think, first, and consider:

"I was not sure the open sore"

and...

"Is it right or is it kind
If I were thee and thee were me."

The golden rule and empathy...a wise, loving man you are!

Enjoyed, hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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9 posted 2003-03-31 08:47 AM


Seymour~
You *gift* my day !
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

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10 posted 2003-03-31 08:55 AM


Sy, you and your words always make my day brighter..
Come, we'll sit over the rainbow and drink tea.
~Morning Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-03-31 08:59 AM


Elizabeth,
Thank you love,

Pat,
That's how you spell the golden rule. One times one is one.

Marge,
And you lift my day.

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2003-03-31 09:02 AM


Nancy,
Over the rainbow is my favorite place.

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13 posted 2003-03-31 09:39 AM


Beautiful, drifting piece this morning dear Seymour. I am once again late, and now I have to carry this tray of tarts all the way over the rainbow to where you are sipping tea!! Oh, I don't mind, afterall, there just might be a pot of gold! hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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14 posted 2003-03-31 09:49 AM


Whenever I find myself having to reply after so many have said so much it is always easier to just say it simply: You are absolutely fantastic. Thank you.
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15 posted 2003-03-31 10:15 AM


Morning Seymour,  
Thank you for the wonderful poem
this morning....so full of wisdom.

Heart Hugs,  
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2003-03-31 10:16 AM


Chris ,
There is, there is, but it is all mental gold.
LOL

morefiah
That's as good as it gets, thank you.

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2003-03-31 10:17 AM


Ethel,
Thank you my dear.

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18 posted 2003-03-31 11:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, but that is truly the way to fly, and you seem to know how to take-off ever so well! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you flitter-by with flying colors, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May ove and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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19 posted 2003-04-01 04:44 AM


wow! Love this!

LOL @ Toe

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2003-04-01 07:20 AM


Noah,
Thank you for the read and reply.

passing shadows
Thanks for the WOW.

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