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Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-03-04 03:35 PM



Look into your heart
Tell me, do you like what you see
Or is the darkness too much to bear
It's gotten so bad lately
You can't decide any more
Is it you talking
is it the alter-ego you created last night
To help you get through today
Do you know the difference
can you think of anyone
Who can help you find the way
Is there any way to find out
Is there any way

I look in your eyes
To me, I don't like what I see
The heaviness and the lies is there for all
It's gotten so bad lately
No one believes you any more
Your mouth's always talking
The windows to your soul say something else
Do you feel no one listens
Do you even care at all
Can you think of anything
That can help us think your way
Is there any time to try it
Is there any way

Look into your heart
Tell me, do you like what you see
Or is the darkness too much to bear
It's gotten so bad lately You can't decide any more
Did you lose it all
Was it ever yours to begin with
Can you think of a time, once
When it was all in your hand
Did you think it would go
Who can help you get it back
Is ther any way to regain it
Is there any way

© Copyright 2003 Bradly Stott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-04 03:51 PM


Nice write and heart felt
>>phantom poet<<

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2 posted 2003-03-04 03:54 PM


I know about people like this. They talk so lovely too, and we love them so much... but they can't be trusted.

My heart holds some grief too, but those who love me can get past that and even help me get through it.
Like this poem alot, I can ~feel~ it.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-03-04 03:59 PM


Ok now you are scaring me - goodness - no - the eyes that stare back at me deceive me - disgrace me - replace me - ahhh this was IT!
Excellent! xxoo

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4 posted 2003-03-31 11:08 PM


Have you ever heard of someone pushing someone they love away because someone told them too...lied that they didn't love them when they truly did and regret it every day???  Kind of a twist on what your poem said....Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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5 posted 2003-03-31 11:32 PM




(big hugggssssssss) I too don't like that when it happens, I just think "Make up your mind" and then when you sound so hostile the frustration can tarnish everything becaus eof the insecurity in the knots produced! (sad sigh) This is well-expressed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bradly, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-03-31 11:45 PM


It's gotten so bad lately
No one believes you any more
Your mouth's always talking
The windows to your soul say something else
***
That's the crux of it, isn't it?

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7 posted 2003-04-01 04:42 AM


good questions...very thought-provoking write
inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2003-04-01 06:57 AM


good questions, yes, from someone who seems to care; may not get answered though, it appears,
nice work, starkey

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