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Is There Any Way
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Is There Any Way |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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Look into your heart Tell me, do you like what you see Or is the darkness too much to bear It's gotten so bad lately You can't decide any more Is it you talking is it the alter-ego you created last night To help you get through today Do you know the difference can you think of anyone Who can help you find the way Is there any way to find out Is there any way I look in your eyes To me, I don't like what I see The heaviness and the lies is there for all It's gotten so bad lately No one believes you any more Your mouth's always talking The windows to your soul say something else Do you feel no one listens Do you even care at all Can you think of anything That can help us think your way Is there any time to try it Is there any way Look into your heart Tell me, do you like what you see Or is the darkness too much to bear It's gotten so bad lately You can't decide any more Did you lose it all Was it ever yours to begin with Can you think of a time, once When it was all in your hand Did you think it would go Who can help you get it back Is ther any way to regain it Is there any way |
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Phantom Poet Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 116Arizona USA |
Nice write and heart felt >>phantom poet<< |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I know about people like this. They talk so lovely too, and we love them so much... but they can't be trusted. My heart holds some grief too, but those who love me can get past that and even help me get through it. Like this poem alot, I can ~feel~ it. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok now you are scaring me - goodness - no - the eyes that stare back at me deceive me - disgrace me - replace me - ahhh this was IT! Excellent! xxoo |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Have you ever heard of someone pushing someone they love away because someone told them too...lied that they didn't love them when they truly did and regret it every day??? Kind of a twist on what your poem said....Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) I too don't like that when it happens, I just think "Make up your mind" and then when you sound so hostile the frustration can tarnish everything becaus eof the insecurity in the knots produced! (sad sigh) This is well-expressed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bradly, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's gotten so bad lately No one believes you any more Your mouth's always talking The windows to your soul say something else *** That's the crux of it, isn't it? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good questions...very thought-provoking write |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
good questions, yes, from someone who seems to care; may not get answered though, it appears, nice work, starkey |
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