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Sunkissed
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0 posted 2003-03-31 12:54 PM



Officer Brock's cerulean blues
read him his rights & my curves
in one magnificent sweep
though I pretended I didn't see,
we were both aware that my friend's
fiance wasn't the only one in the
room being charged...

At the hospital, between muffled
sobs and blood, we were alone
on the sterile white tile
finely tuned & speaking in
riddles
he fidgeted police like moves
while I awkwardly acknowledged
his peacock feathers

finally he asked if we'd met before
not that he thought I'd been arrested
you see, but, "You look very familliar
to me..."
ofcourse he patrols the area where
I live so he could have seen me
walking down the street or in
the park, perhaps...
A careful unabashed study of me
left me breathless, unable to speak
instead I smiled, disconcertedly

because I never knew white lashes
& deep blue went so well together
I never knew this blinding swell
between light & dark could produce
such an incredible sound
on the second round
of this sweet assault~

He told me his name with a smile
waiting for more, but I was band
with gold and apologetic
still he stayed, longer than any
officer really would
we were grateful, my friend & I
she had her reasons, I had mine

Finally, he had to go
leaving a spicy manly scent
that begged me follow
We thanked him for his time
(& the free electricity)
again that gaze fell upon me
he said, "Perhaps I'll see you
on my rounds"
I nodded & looked down
Lord help us if I do...


Sunkissed.



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1 posted 2003-03-31 01:03 AM


LOL, I saw this scene in 3D living color!

"Officer Brock's cerulean blues
read him his rights & my curves
in one magnificent sweep'"

A great write!


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-03-31 05:44 AM


Nice...handcuffs I suppose...James
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3 posted 2003-03-31 09:00 AM


LOL yeah...you shouldn't asked him if his handcuffs worked! LOL

Great job!!!!  seductive...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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