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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-03-31 12:33 PM

Bursting bubbles, floating to the top
an expensive taste I can't afford

Long stem flutes cut away
reflecting crystal prisms in the light of love

Pours into the pain that aches
and steals away, forever always

Burnt out candles, soften the glow
melting slow, a sigh that blows

Hollow echo's ricocheting
rush the hush of blush, that keeps the fire burning

Tipping sipping
come tomorrow, drown my sorrow

Lay me down to sleep
spinning spinning

Cheek to cheek
a dance away that moves me

Roses in a vase, set in silver place
cool slipping hands

Pull away
as quickly as they came

Fizzles in the sizzle
without a trace to touch

~*~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-03-31 12:38 PM

Here's hoping you find a permanent sizzle if there is such a thing

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-03-31 12:40 PM

I almost got dizzy this time, bluesygal.
Sad write, but effervescent to the end.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-03-31 01:02 AM

Not sure that there is such a thing,
but thanks anyway Raph~
Appreciate your thoughts that count!

Thanks for reading my dizzy spell Kacy~
I would have it made if only I could swim up stream.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-03-31 07:00 AM

Blues - I cannot imagine the smile upon the face of the man that takes your hand as you sing to him like you do here . . . this is lovely writing always is and here:

Tipping sipping
come tomorrow, drown my sorrow

come tomorrow missy . . . xxoo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-03-31 07:04 AM

love these from you, the forlorn ones, watching the rainbow faaaaaaaddddddddddddeee
away so softly, nice touch, my platinum one

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-03-31 08:52 AM

BluesSerenade~

My ! My !
I like the popping of this poetic cork~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

7 posted 2003-03-31 10:38 AM

love it *S*

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2003-03-31 10:43 AM

most enjoyable....

regards,
sudhir

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-03-31 10:45 AM

Lori, I love this "fizzling sizzling"
write of yours. I could almost see
the bubbles....

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

10 posted 2003-03-31 10:52 AM

You are sizzling hot! As usual...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2003-03-31 04:27 PM

I'm not myself today, a little under the weather~
You know you're getting older
when you wish you could take all those
naps that you refused to take as a kid.

But I do thank you so much for reading,
your wonderful replies mean a great deal to me.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-31-2003 04:28 PM).]

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