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Rush the Hush |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Bursting bubbles, floating to the top an expensive taste I can't afford Long stem flutes cut away reflecting crystal prisms in the light of love Pours into the pain that aches and steals away, forever always Burnt out candles, soften the glow melting slow, a sigh that blows Hollow echo's ricocheting rush the hush of blush, that keeps the fire burning Tipping sipping come tomorrow, drown my sorrow Lay me down to sleep spinning spinning Cheek to cheek a dance away that moves me Roses in a vase, set in silver place cool slipping hands Pull away as quickly as they came Fizzles in the sizzle without a trace to touch ~*~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Here's hoping you find a permanent sizzle if there is such a thing |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I almost got dizzy this time, bluesygal. Sad write, but effervescent to the end. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Not sure that there is such a thing, but thanks anyway Raph~ Appreciate your thoughts that count! Thanks for reading my dizzy spell Kacy~ I would have it made if only I could swim up stream.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Blues - I cannot imagine the smile upon the face of the man that takes your hand as you sing to him like you do here . . . this is lovely writing always is and here: Tipping sipping come tomorrow, drown my sorrow come tomorrow missy . . . xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
love these from you, the forlorn ones, watching the rainbow faaaaaaaddddddddddddeee away so softly, nice touch, my platinum one |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ My ! My ! I like the popping of this poetic cork~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
love it *S* Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
most enjoyable.... regards, sudhir |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, I love this "fizzling sizzling" write of yours. I could almost see the bubbles....  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
You are sizzling hot! As usual...  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm not myself today, a little under the weather~ You know you're getting older when you wish you could take all those naps that you refused to take as a kid. But I do thank you so much for reading, your wonderful replies mean a great deal to me. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-31-2003 04:28 PM).] |
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