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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Conversion diversion tinkling link drink . . . SMASH breaking glass diamonds scattered in the grass Scurry hurry Grab your prize Rise psycho losing lightning crazy Napping rapping Someone is tip-tapping The raven? Go away, please I've no time to play not today Eyes darting behind your back Who said that? . . .waking up with lipstick traces crazy scattered lines pictures useless music smiling laughing pretending to be swimming sacred silence scarred within the realms of this reality lies insanity . . . Neck muscles taut spinning like a top Nobody there, my dear I fear the voices these noises not of me I want to be free from this cage rage A captor with key It is me . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-29-2003 11:39 PM).] |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Sue, Maybe it's just that I really am that thick, however it took me 4 tries at this to even begin to understand what you were trying to say... then it hit me... WHO FRIGGIN' CARES?????? The words themself actually kept me reading after the first time, and I enjoyed it more each time. This is really a first rate job. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BRAD!!!!!! You posted before I was able to say that this is what happens after you listen to System of a Down while reading Poe - I am really not crazy - hehehehehe . . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-29-2003 11:37 PM).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
 I liked it very much. And Brad is right-even if we don't understand a poem we can enjoy it. I do see the 'disorder' in this one. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
System of a Down, and Poe. You need say nothing more. I won't even try to understand, but thoroughly enjoyed the read.  |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Listening to SOAD while reading Poe????? And you say you're NOT crazy??? lol Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok if I must explain - please go read about schizophrenia in the DSM - IV - (a manual for psychiatric disorders) I thought it was clear that in these lines someone was having a nervous breakdown - is realllly not about myself - I swear . . . . [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-29-2003 11:53 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yep! yer nuts. Liking the dijointedness of your disorder though |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Actually, Sue, I have a copy of the DSM-IV on my desk, and have a friend that is supposed to be getting me the new DSM-V when it finally comes out. As I said before, I really must be that thick... however, now that you explained it, It all makes perfect sense... Thanks for clearing it up. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
mmmm cocoa puffs |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Brad - you made me laugh so hard up there - am still laughing and no - you are not thick - I am crazy obviously - no seriously - that was pretty strange in itself to just come upon - hey you know the DSM - very cool - but no - NOT THICK - far from it - is my crazy writing . . . Hey when you get that new copy - make sure I am not in there k? but you liked it and thats what matters - thank you Poet - TY - hehehe disorder lol understatement . . . Rose lol - smart . . . back away quietly . . . Ed - gee thanks - and all this without a MD approval - mannnn . . . TY Raph sweety - oops I meant - (a certain puppety dog friend of ours) - lmao - thats coo koo puffs - and you didnt even have to read this now did you to know that? No - of course you didnt . . . (made me laugh so hard when I saw just that - mmmm cocoa puffs - still laughing . . . xxoo Thank you guys for reading my . . . slip . . . oops heheheh . . . and White Stripes too fueled this one xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-30-2003 02:28 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the whole thread! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Phbllllllllltttttttttt..nite nite coco |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
It is only because I lost my mind long ago, that I understand, nice write, fellow crazy one."and because they are gone, they are one" Jason |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Dixie - hahahaha thank you - still smiling Raph - so its Coco huh? mannnn . . . . stop spitting at me and geez I am the crazy one -go figure . . . Jason - hehehe someone understands this - now I am scared . . . TY Thanks guys xxoo |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Sue....I am saying this in the most loving manner I can... YOU ARE NUTS WOMAN! lol Ringo: you are Thick, but it's nice of Sue to console you that you aren't... LOL I agree with Dixie...I like this whole thread....but I do need to go space out for a few now that I've tried to make sense of that poem LOLOL Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
eating seeds again? yea, system and poe, thats overkill for one day.. pshyco crazy, psycho crazy, yea, i t was written for me too [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-30-2003 08:06 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFL, you just posted an SOS, that's all... that combo you listened to? migraine material |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Neck muscles taut spinning like a top Nobody there, my dear I fear That pretty much sums it up... wouldn't you love to spend a weekend at some swanky spa just to loosen up a bit!! Or just flutter in a bird bath for an entire day!  Neat poem little birdie~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
um... I understood it immediately... should I be frightened?  hugs Sue. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
um... I understood it immediately... should I be frightened? hugs Sue. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kristie - sshhhhhh - dont telll . . . Michele - hehehe - you know that tune - eating seeds - ummm no - but found something strange growing in my yard . . . Kacy - lmao - an SOS - hehehe - hey - this music takes AWAY my migraine - I think I need Ritalin . . . Blues - yesssssss my neck is killing me! Cant go in the birdbath it is like 20 degrees here - freeze my wingies off . . . K - now I knew you would understand this one - lmao - be afraid - very afraid . . . Thanks guys xxoo |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
 regards, sudhir |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Sudhir for reading my ramble lol |
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