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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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She took the flower from me, folding the last petal into my hand smiling "she loves you.." [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-31-2003 12:36 AM).] |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Raph, it amazes me how much meaning you can cram into so few words.You can turn a single sentence into a deep poem.I think you should publish. Jason |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
softly petaled, again *sigh* How do you keep doing this? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Maybe it just comes from experience with relatives..if I had something to say I had to say it fast or lose their attention..it never worked either why do you think i write instead, got tired of conversations with the walls |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
keep talking to these walls, Raph, for they've got hearts as well as ears |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raphael - this is *smiling* the most beautiful thing you have ever written - I closed my eyes and pictured that flower - you brought me there sweety - like you always seem to do and yes I agree - you should be publishing - this *sigh* it just IS . . . xxoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A moment to be cherished! Daisy stripped naked .... in sacrifice to make you know you are loved. With such devotion you can trust the result! Molto carino! Margherita |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
oh, how sweet every badboy has a soft side, somewhere,  |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
i love it, I Love It, I LOVE IT!!!!!! how sweet! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
So brilliantly beautiful |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Awww. That's amazing. Just that small bit seems to tell an entire novel. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
petals, simple petals have so much meaning... L~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, you are becoming an expert at these... with a lot said in so few words... AND the references to love. BTW, you don't have to talk to the walls anymore...... you have lots of ears and hearts listening very carefully to each word you say. You write so well that each word has an enormous amount of meaning, and if not read carefully, every word won't be heard the way you intend it to be. Keep writng, friend. Heart Hugs,  Ethel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Jason haven't tried don't know if i'm ready yet Kacy thank you nice to know someone listens for a change I had some amazing inspiration Sue grazie Margherita Thanks Michelle, and shhhhhhhhh still have an image to keep up Thanks Kristie Sue glad you did Thank you kindly Brad Eromyna thank you very much Lauren of course it didn't happen this way but me and my metaphors Thank you Ethel I know, and that's why i keep coming back [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-31-2003 12:17 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*big smile* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh myyyy..my knees are so weak I don't think I could stand up if I wanted to. You take my breath away. ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
...that hides the trace of jealousy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey you, pardon me, but your spirit is showing. simple. Beautiful. and a delight for me to read. Big smiles today.  |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
Sweet! Hugs, Etain. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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phunkimunkee New Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 8 |
Its true. A lots was said in that one line. Cool stuff. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Nice to see you smile..jealous oh my Enchantress breathe my child breathe K time for a new belt, nice to see some smiles Thanks Etain! Vandana I'm glad Love the name Phunki and thanks for reading |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, I love this.... Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
I agree with Jason, let me know when you are ready. |
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