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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Know, then That even as I die You are killing me My tongue searches These dry, cracked lips For the last vestige Of that final, bitter Kiss [This message has been edited by wranx (03-30-2003 07:15 PM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ouch! I hope this isn't true. But, still...it makes for a great write! Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Know, then That even as I die You are killing me *********************************** If this doesn't provide the reader with a visual, nothing will. Very excellent write. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...is this the kiss of defeat...? -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
... because you KNOW.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...may I just say |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Wranx, You didn't mince any words, for certain. Touching in mind, heart and gut. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hmmmm....wranx tries to give up smoking.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
sometimes a kiss is just a kiss |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ed...i too am too weak to be this tough...helen |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
my favourite thus far |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 on the cheek, will ya accept that??  L~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh my. This is definitely a 'wranx'...a new poetic form of poetry that kicks you in the gut and makes your heart hurt. I like it. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Excellent, as usual. Jason |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
wranx~ Sometimes your writing just ties me up in knots and throws me for a loop!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed - I am proud of you - this is beautiful . . . sorry you had to but good that you did . . . xxoo lol Rat - |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So extremely well done! Smiling at the truth of this. TD |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
...either that or the kiss of death? :-) Great job....vivid Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
WOW, Ed....... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
the pleasure of reading this was all mine... thanks regards, sudhir |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This cracked my lips....well done Wranx...Your picture reminds me of a mirror I used to look at many years ago... |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Nice. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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