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The whole of you
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The whole of you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 The whole of you Echoes of your voice I chase in the night a lasso I cast in vain radars my eyes searching the skies. In the trail of comets fragments of you but my heart aches for the whole of you. I call out your name tall and straight I stand on the edge of my pain swallowing my fear. The crystal clear tones of this one word song lift me into hope. I close my eyes to feel you within, roaming on cat paws across my soul. Passion rises along these velvety tracks and my blood rushes through veins on alert painting my skin in red. Your voice vibrates anew I gather all the fragments dispersed in my disbelief and, my Love, once more I touch the whole of you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - romantic words to touch a heart... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent...James |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Touching in a most pleasant way... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent...soft and romantic! Much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Pascal Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 54Ontario, Canada |
Excellent write - so very romantic. Pascal  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
its all or nothing, with me too, cant just be a whisper , gotta shout it out |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Your poems can be construed both as romantic and/or spirit. Beautiful always, if it's the latter and you here HIS voice can you tell him to call? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A keeper for my files. Loved both the spiritual and romantic feel to this one, Margherita. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Margherita - a lovely poem... a  in style... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a wonderful expression here. So much depth and tenderness throughout. TD |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You touch the whole with every word. Love, Eric |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Margherita, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I feel this disbelief sometimes but then I only imagine how good love can get and try and imagine the whole and if I can really feel it someday! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
love is all around isnt it? very beautiful words of the feeling that someone is just a touch away |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all dear friends for your loving replies. Caro Raffaele, as we are all children of the same God, when I love someone I also love God. You captured this well through my words. And yes I'll ask Him to send you a message on Angel's wings. Love to all. Margherita |
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