Loss For Words - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #25

Loss For Words

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-30 05:05 PM

Loss For Words

I would write
for you
a beautiful
love letter
but I am
at a loss
for words
for I hear
whispers on
the wind
secrets that
take away
my breath
and this release
finds me falling
how can I
create in this
musical tone
and breathlessness
is my statement
of emotion

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-03-30 06:01 PM

Emotions speak volumes ...
Enjoyed.
Margherita

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2003-03-30 09:40 PM

helen - your words are always of you, your feelings, and your depth, like these are. I read them with the sensitivity of how you have written them...

BC

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

3 posted 2003-03-30 10:48 PM

h
you,
at a loss for words ?
how can that be ?
S

[This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (03-30-2003 11:34 PM).]

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-03-31 12:01 PM

I would write
for you
a beautiful
love letter
but I am
at a loss
for words

.......nope, you did just fine....lucky fella, that one!

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2003-03-31 12:30 PM

Lovely again, Lady.
Your words always speak for my heart.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

6 posted 2003-03-31 07:41 AM

very passionate and very sincere... :-) I liked...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.