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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-30 05:05 PM


Loss For Words

I would write
for you
a beautiful
love letter
but I am
at a loss
for words
for I hear
whispers on
the wind
secrets that
take away
my breath
and this release
finds me falling
how can I
create in this
musical tone
and breathlessness
is my statement
of emotion



© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2003-03-30 06:01 PM


Emotions speak volumes ...
Enjoyed.
Margherita

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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2 posted 2003-03-30 09:40 PM


helen - your words are always of you, your feelings, and your depth, like these are. I read them with the sensitivity of how you have written them...

BC

S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom
3 posted 2003-03-30 10:48 PM


h
you,
at a loss for words ?
how can that be ?
S

[This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (03-30-2003 11:34 PM).]

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4 posted 2003-03-31 12:01 PM


I would write
for you
a beautiful
love letter
but I am
at a loss
for words

.......nope, you did just fine....lucky fella, that one!

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Temptress
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5 posted 2003-03-31 12:30 PM


Lovely again, Lady.
Your words always speak for my heart.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

KristieSue
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6 posted 2003-03-31 07:41 AM


very passionate and very sincere... :-)  I liked...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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