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phunkimunkee
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0 posted 2003-03-30 01:38 PM


Lightning Strikes

A rose opens in the fresh light of a new morning
Love’s perfection is in a simple commonness
A compatible joviality
Compassion for the weaknesses

Nature can be a freak
Hidden in the deepness of your self
A silence is slow to burn
The dull sound of pain is heavy

Curves are to be learned
Like the affections of the other
Cultivated rottenness plagues my mind
Polarity finds no reversal

Frustrated electricity
The nausea of a butterfly’s flutter makes for
Regurgitated tears
Transfixed on love and hope

Educated by the suffering
Callused by the constant
Bound by the yoke
And the pistons of life

What we know is a gift
Like each others silent music
Real joy is embracing
Happiness is the you

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Saluting with misty eyes
1 posted 2003-03-30 05:43 PM


Nature can be a freak
Hidden in the deepness of your self
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Cultivated rottenness plagues my mind
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Very interesting ways of expressing yourself, and a very good job over all...
I'm off to search for your other posts.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-03-30 06:24 PM


Welcome!

"What we know is a gift
Like each others silent music
Real joy is embracing
Happiness is the you"

Beautiful, intense write.
Margherita

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