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Flavors Of Moon
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Flavors Of Moon |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh, reclined within this golden pouring stream Finest points to full of rivers currents beam In amorous plays upon the bodice of the night Tantalized in fingers gold and warm delight Oh, the warm that pools upon the pillow seam Sweets, so fragile licked of silken trails stream Warm in waves across the velvet lips of night Honey, dripped on ripples made of heaven’s light By night another taste of harmony in dreams Seductive sways the light bent softly beams Taken, again and again as the edges sweetly spills Oh, what wonder savors so, to full-spent golden thrills Copyright Kkh 3/29/03 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly beautiful book submission Kathleen. ~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You certainly have my vote on this one. A definite keeper...IWIHWT! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, a beautiful poem and book submission. I would love to read a book of your poetry, friend.  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This one took away my breath. And it sure ain't because of the "moon."  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I love the moon and you drizzle the candy-coated vision with butterscotch! (kiss on cheek) Yay, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautiful and glowing soft as a shadowed moon on misty summer night, really pretty poem |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you so much you guys. You are always so much an inspiration, and such a wonderful group to write with. TD |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A fine choice for submission, K... I enjoyed..  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... Seductive! Very much enjoyed and you have my vote. Love, Margherita |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I'd love to see your poem, side by side with my favorite moon write. This is completely magical. Sandra |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Diamond - I loved this: Honey, dripped on ripples made of heaven’s light such imagery - very nice write xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
got my vote! wonderful write! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ThisDiamond~ Speak to me of the moon and you have my rapt attention~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Such poetry should be rewarded by special attention. paladin |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The color is absolutely perfect for the poem... unfortunately, it's hell on aging eyes! LOL But words such as these are more than worth highlighting to see more clearly... this is beautiful! *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
lovely...one of my favorites now... ~A~/M |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Kathleen, this was utterly heavenly. I like this style of writing, don't know what it's called and can't seem to do it myself, but brava to you. Hugs for peace, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How beautiful! It will be a delightful addition to Reflections! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful. Its been a little while since I've ready any of your work. WHAT WAS I thinking?  You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You made the book! Happy Dance! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES Kathleen!! CONGRATULATIONS!! You're in the book!! ~Hugs~ |
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one_thought Junior Member
since 2003-04-03
Posts 23just a state of mind |
Nice one Even if i don't know what the book thing is yet. First time here. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
quite visual and very much enjoyed |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
ThisDiamond...Gorgeous poem!!! Striking imagery throughout and beautifully rhymed. ***Ivy Rose |
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