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Darkfire k'Sheyna
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0 posted 2003-03-29 11:50 AM



I wipe my sweaty palms on my jeans
and eye The Door.
The Door into which
so many hopefuls disappeared…
only to reappear in tears.
Another emerges.
One look and I know.
She got bad news.
My name is called.
My hands tremble.
My stomach drops.
A shiver of fear races up my spine.
I square my shoulders,
Call up my mask of calm,
And resolutely enter
The Door.
A row of grim faces meet me,
And my resolve quavers.
One nods.
“Begin,” he says.
I do my best, but watching them,
I am uncertain.
I finish, and they confer in low murmurs.
Taking a deep breath,
I quash my fears,
And prepare for the worst.
One turns to me.
She smiles.
I allow myself a moment of hope.
Could it be?
“You’re in,” she says.
I dance in wild joy.
Seeing their amusement, I stop.
“Thank you,” I say.
Then,
With a broad grin splitting my face,
I leave the audition
And exit through
The Door.

This is for all those who do auditions- is is based on my experiance of many many nerve-wracking ones for theatre and music.
-Darkfire-

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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-03-29 01:05 PM


Wonderful. I could almost feel the anxiety myself, breath accelerating, blood pressure rising ... and then the release ... displaying exhilaration. So realistic!
Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2003-03-29 11:17 PM


Jennifer, Just reading your wordsd made my hands start to sweat again thinking about the auditions I've had to endure. And they never seem to get easier, do they????
Great Write.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

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