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In The Wind
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In The Wind |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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In the wind parts of a world move move unbidden only toward the wind’s destination a strength a drive of it seeking seeking while it takes what can be taken, driving driving random random through this patchwork wilderness of just small things taken taken up to where they would not have been this second ago and larger things hold just longer longer giving themselves at last no longer usless appendages of a world now yearning yearning in full consort with all other |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...It was a beautiful Santa Ana day in So Cal...wasn't it!!! The wind took my car on freeway and tried to make me change lanes without the proper turn signal. Love your poem!  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thoughts in waterfall. ThisDiamond |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yep, love that wind....had to try and write how it felt. But my lips are chapped from being out in it today....and I had an experience like yours, Martie, wind wig-wagging me on the freeway. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Vivid work ratleader. loved it |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Rat - nice form & flow - loved this . . . xxoo |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Loved the poem and the imagery Cold hands means a warm heart |
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