Open Poetry #25 |
relief |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I found myself sitting there in the diner Quite often Drinking promises Laced with Irish coffee Making idle conversation With an acquitance You know one of those convience things Only when I needed something To fill that empty void Deep down That I could never really pin point But only made it worse When I had let the sweet Intoxication of my emotions Get the best of me But I finally found Someone, not even close To a convience And when I look deep within his eyes When I hear his voice And his sweet promises I try to push away Ever sitting in the diner For the past couple years With an acquitance With my convient temporary Form of relief It all seems like a dream A faint memory I still sit in the diner This time I can only smile I believe in destiny Even love He's my reflection The calm before the storm Like a whirlwind Cleasning my troubled heart I threw away everything The temporary relief I only want to sit with him In the diner Sharing a plate of french fries And a milkshake No more Irish coffee And no more temporary relief Because I know Deep down inside That I want this to be permanent... [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (03-29-2003 10:44 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
never mind the Irish coffee, just a shake and fries...I see what you mean. good show on this one |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kristie - this IS your best - quite amazing - my friend and I do know this all too well: Drinking promises Laced with Irish coffee I do this every morning lol - great write here - loved this xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah this strikes close Kris as all your words seem to do |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kristen, this is a sense of relief I can relate to... well done, m'dear... Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness! This is well worth a second read through!...Off I go! Bye for now! Peace, Love & Light, Linda P.S. and I'll grab myself a second cup of that Irish coffee! |
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