Open Poetry #25 |
Flame Eternal |
OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Flame Eternal You are a perfect picture, Pastel shade of pink, and black, Auburn hair, set in gentle curves, Your eyes meet mine, for an instant we are lost in one another, My heart beats faster, that hint of humor, perched upon your lips, The pride swells within me, I give a lazy wave.. then mouth the words “Thank you“, But it doesn’t seem enough, I am transfixed by you beside me, You turn, framed by sunlight, Radiant, and so we sweep, carefree, into Dealey Plaza.... Olias. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Olias, this is lovely. Enjoyed the read of this dear poet. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very good piece |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'The pride swells within me, I give a lazy wave.. then mouth the words “Thank you“, But it doesn’t seem enough, I am transfixed by you beside me' Greatest feeling in the world huh? Nice to read you again. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You just sent me back several decades Olias... and leave me wondering how different it could have been... Just last Thursday I had a silent reminder of the various forms that Camelot has taken in my life... this was one of them... bless you for coming home! Now, Sir, about Reflections...have you submitted one for the book and I just haven't found it yet? Hmmmm???? Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?... |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
WhiteRose: Thank you so much for your kind reply, I'm glad you enjoyed. Brad Majors: Thanks for taking the time to read and reply its much appreciated. Duncan: Its good to be back, thank you for your kind reply. Sunshine: Hello, Thanks for your reply, I agree the world may have been very different I think many people lost alot of hope on that day. As far as the book goes, I havent submitted anything, I'm not firing on all cylinders at the moment, my writing is not up to par, but who knows practise makes perfect. Thanks once again. Regards to everyone, Take care. Olias. |
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