Open Poetry #25 |
A Storm Is Coming |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~*~ A storm is coming, I can feel it in the air. There is a sense of anticipation in the stillness. Gathering clouds are beginning to swirl in the darkening sky as warm air rushes in to fill the void. Flashes of lightening streak the charged atmostphere followed by the deafening roar of thunder that reverberates against my chest. As the firmament unleashes its formidable power, I feel so small. Within moments the skies open up releasing heaven's pent-up tears. The parched land drinks deeply as its life is renewed. With the churning of the soil, an earthy fragrance is released into the electrified night air. The cooling rain brings relief from the oppressive heat of this sweltering summer's day. Dried riverbeds begin to flow with the enervating forces of the storm and nature is in balance once more. ~*~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-29-2003 07:05 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...this is powerful and moving. Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ericc ~ ---and so was your reply! Thank you very much! Peace, Love & Light, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ Good morning! --I'm glad that you did and for saying so! Thank you! Peace, Love & Light, Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Linda, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love thunderstorms and I hope soon here we get a lot more as despite the huge blizzard we got a week and a half ago, we still have high drought concerns! (kiss on cheek) You always make Mother Nature smile with your precious poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, the weather has been so changeable here. One minute you have a snowstorm, the next you have a thunderstorm! I love thunderstorms! I find them invigorating and cleansing... Love & Lightening! Linda |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I love storms! ~Liz Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Energetic little write there EA. Much enjoyed. ThisDiamond |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Linda - you had me with every line - and I love storms too - well the maelstroms that is . . . xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Liz ~ With a name like "skyshine" I would have expected you to love anything having to do with celestial events! Thank you! Peace, Light ~ and Lightening! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ThisDiamond ~ Why thank ya kindly, Ms. TD! Happy Spring! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
littlewing ~ You adorable little sprite! You just had to add your little twist of humor at the end of your reply! LOL Happy Springtime! EA |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
My sweet sister, this line, With the churning of the soil, an earthy fragrance is released into the electrified night air. is to die for. How I adore your words and that smell and it's why digging in the dirt is my passion. . Loved all your words ... huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Earth Angel - a storm I'm in at present, and you have described it just like it is... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti ~ I loved your reply! It is wonderful when others identify so well with what I am writing about! Oh, how I love that earthy scent that fills a stormy night's electrified air! Luvs & hugs, dear sister friend! Linda |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
The cooling rain brings relief from the oppressive heat of this sweltering summer's day. I might have picked any of your phrases, (I liked Marti's too) but this reminds me of my Minnesota boyhood. (Btw, how did anyone from Ontario write this? Thought you were in igloos all year? Ouch Ouch...) Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ The negative ions that are produced from a storm are very healing. I love the sights, the smells and the energy of thunderstorms. It gives me pleasure that you can identify with my portrayal of them....Enjoy the one you are presently experiencing! Thank you for your comments! Love and Light EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ken ~ We may live in ice-cold igloos but we keep our noses warm by Eskimo kissing!... Thanks for sharing your thoughts!--I think! Peace, Light & Love, EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, I almost heard the thunder and saw the lightning. I'm glad I'm out of the rain.....LOL Hugs, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel ~ Thank you, sweet friend! Keep safe and warm in Gary's arms when the winds blow and the rains come down in torrents... Love & Light, Linda |
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Pascal Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 54Ontario, Canada |
Very nice - well written. After such a hard winter I long for the sights and sounds of a good thunderstorm. Your poem brought it to me. Pascal Believe in yourself and wonderous things will happen [This message has been edited by Pascal (03-30-2003 08:41 PM).] |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Linda, I thoroughly enjoyed this write. It is as visual and awesome as everything else you have written. Great job!! Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pascal ~ I'm with you, my fellow Ontarian! It has been a looooonnnngggg winter! And I looooonnngggg for a good summer thunderstorm! Peace, Love & Lightening...! Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ringo ~ Why thank you for such a lovely reply! Happy spring! EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (03-30-2003 10:05 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love a good storm.....even when it's only beginning.....I love this!! Lauren~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
One summer night in 1952, my 12th birthday, we had a storm just like this that shook and thundered my world. That's what I really found in your poem...not an igloo. :-) Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A thoroughly enjoyable storm! You've quenched my thirst for a refreshing rain, a much needed renewal. |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Linda, Great visual impact here enjoyed very much, my friend aloha and hugs, Cher Poetry is: |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lauren ~ ...and I "love" your lovely comment! Love & Lightening! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ken ~ You have the spirit of someone far younger than your chronological years! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and I am pleased that you enjoyed the storm that I whipped up with my magic wand! I am curious, are you a Leo? Love, Light--& Lightening! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Midnitesun ~ Thanxalot for the "thoroughly enjoyable" feedback! Happy springtime! Warm hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Cher ~ I loved your reply, my friend!--and the aloha and hugs! May thunderstorms add light to your life! Warm hugs, Linda |
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