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Two Feathers and a Song
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Two Feathers and a Song |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Two Feathers and a Song They’ve given up on us the ducks all quack and quick eyes have feathered their heads and drawn away from such display The turn about sky blows pieces of us around until my hair is in your hands and your eyes are the sky On some ground of feet we walk around puddles knowing all the while it is we that melted and once took flight across the lake to soar just two feathers and a song |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Martie, unbelievably said... I have no words but splendid.  I get your point here. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wow, once again Martie just takes us along on her magic carpet. Your imagery makes me feel as if I were there....thanks for sharing. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Martie, Marite~ Your voice just carries in the wind~ A beautiful poem befitting this blustery day. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Martie - a'hhh my friend, your pen and heart is of rose petals. Lovely write... BC |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Martie, this is a splendid write. You tat such lace of words. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Pretty, and spare. A beauty. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very beautiful, Martie.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ed was right on - another magic carpet ride, to lands only shown to us by your pen - and your imagination... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Duck feathers two you, my friend... This is a wonderful verse...  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Exquisite Thank you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The turn about sky blows pieces of us around until my hair is in your hands and your eyes are the sky =============================== I NEEEEEED some Martie glasses.... cuz seeing things thru your eyes is just the coolest kind of inspire. Everytime i read you...I end up shaking me mothy head and smiling.   "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sis~ This is just ducky with me !  Love you oodles ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Martie, Grinning at some of the replies. This is of course, beautiful. Your creativity, a joy. Thank you for sharing it with us. Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I love ducks and I just love it when they quack as I always love to go to the lake just to feed them and watch them float across the pond, I especially cry in joy when I see baby ducklings swim behind their parents all in a row! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your poetry always makes me smile...your tenderness shows through in everything you write. hugssss M |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - just loved this poem - your writing takes us to so many wonderful places - Paul |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Martie, this is a very lovely piece, a touch of magic that makes me want to soar high too ... Love, Margherita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I started picking my favorite lines... and couldn't leave any out. *S* This is indeed a magic carpet ride... and I'm so glad I didn't miss the bus. *G* Wonderful! |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
my eyes have opened to the beauty of your words, thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti, I believe that Blueserenade described your poetry so well with her reply of: "Your voice just carries in the wind." Warm hugs, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what can I say? just awesome, as always |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I'm with JM...to see the world through your eyes, even for just one day, would be incredible. Hugs to you, friend,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSis~ I came in search of an afternoon song ... and found the gentle lilt of 'two feathers' lifting me up, carrying me through memories~ There is beauty in all you have known~ Thank you ... thank you for sharing it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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