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Sunkissed
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0 posted 2003-03-28 05:52 PM






I shall surrender unto you
My love o’er moss & roses
Under an explosion of stars
Oh, but to claim your soul
Even forever…
Sunkissed.

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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-03-28 06:35 PM


Oh wow...this almost leaves me speechless.
Beautiful!
Eric

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2 posted 2003-03-28 06:36 PM


SunKissed~
Oh my, my ... how outstandingly lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Sunkissed
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3 posted 2003-03-28 06:49 PM


Thank you for your kind comments Eric and Margie.

*hugs*

Sunkissed.

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