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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-03-28 03:45 PM



Sing to me
sweet siren
sing to me
sing a song
with happy endings
not the sad world
I now live
sing of the happy life
her and I shared
moonlit nights
all packaged with pop appeal
moment that could never end
but sadly did
so sing to me siren
make me believe I'm happy
so real I can feel it
pulsing down my spine
as I listen to
the perfect melody
dedicated to the lie
which sadly
can never
be my life.

© Copyright 2003 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-28 03:48 PM


Beautiful...very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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2 posted 2003-03-28 04:23 PM


Once again so powerfuly poignant.
Eric

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-03-28 04:30 PM


thank you!
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4 posted 2003-03-28 04:47 PM


Spun out of the painful past, to the new bright morning. I liked this Brad. TD
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5 posted 2003-03-28 05:32 PM


BradMajors~

'moment that could never end
but sadly did'


Poignantly penned~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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6 posted 2003-03-28 07:29 PM


doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo.............the yellow throated sparrow sings...........

nice  sweet poetic

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7 posted 2003-03-28 08:02 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is sooooooo beautifully heartaching, sweet friend, I hope now your siren sings in your heart as you are so deserving of true loves bliss! (sad sigh) I know these stinging feelings, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Margherita
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8 posted 2003-03-28 08:12 PM


Beautifully displayed emotions.
Love, Margherita

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9 posted 2003-03-28 09:46 PM


oh crap this hurt, loved it it and look forward to all your work..
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