Open Poetry #25 |
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Words Can Say So Much |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() Picture by Josephine Wall * * * * Words have the ability To warm the coldest heart They can bring two souls together With the help of cupid's dart Words can paint a picture Of two people so in love Whose hearts are uplifted To the heavens high above Words can say 'I love you' Filling hearts with deep desire Like a slowly burning ember The flame of love burns higher Words can speak of nature And flow gently like a stream They can paint the finest rainbow And all the colors in between Words can send a message Of love from me to you The perfect form of expression As they declare my point of view Words can build a bridge And introduce me to a friend My great love affair with writing Quite simply has no end * * * * "Love alone is capable of uniting human beings in such a way as to complete and fulfil them for it alone takes them and joins them by what is deepest in themselves." I am in motion |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sue, The last stanza is especially touching. Enjoyed the entire poem. Hugs, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue, you write with such an exquisite gentle touch. Lovely indeed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful, Sue! Yes, words can sometimes warm the heart. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Yes, words can do so much, they can heal a heart, make justice and rights, correct and analyze, make a loved one sing, and make peace, so much more! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I love this, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sue - loved this: My great love affair with writing Quite simply has no end an addiction more like it - like my own skin . . . xxoo |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: A lovely poem and certainly one I can easily relate to. I suppose all writers will! I really enjoyed it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Absolutely loved this! Your words of words are beautiful and uplifting! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sue~ This entire piece is simply stunning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I just love it when you use J. Wall's artwork. Her pictures and your words are meant to be together. Fantastic!! Hugs for peace, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful, Sue. I love your work. And, yes, the pictures compliment your poems very well. ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I like everything about this poem! Awesome. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Yes....Yes they can. Beautiful work! LOVED IT ![]() |
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