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THINKING OF YOU
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
THINKING OF YOU Thinking of you, Water fountain, Out of control. In the bitter winter, Could the chilly wind Shake the faraway rainbow? Floating clouds, Travelling over the sky With some lazy sorrow. Across the Pacific Ocean, Turned into Spring breeze, To the country old, Warmth surounded, Speaking of my heart, Whispers in your shadow. Molecules and atoms, I am turning into, In the air around you. Feel, The vibrations of my heart, Could you? [This message has been edited by Laoha (03-29-2003 02:43 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice thoughts, Laoha...  |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
Very good poem! |
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Goldboat Member
since 2003-02-17
Posts 66 |
Vote! |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
pretty piece |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done..Vote is in! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
wonderful images Laoha |
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Laoha Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 161Nevada, USA |
Nan and Brad: Thanks for the encouragements. Goldboat and Enchantress: Thanks for the votes. Aenimal: Glad you like it. I am learning to use more images instead. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Nice.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Bridgette,very good  Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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