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Finally_When Junior Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 13Land Of Misfits... |
There was a lack of soft air as the spring sun rose in the horizon. A mind flutters of thoughts of spring passion though the heart caves when there is an absence of a lover, of a friend. Upon the chest of an untouched soul lies a simple heart, wishing for anothers touch. A rememberance of the feeling of arms wrapped around your sides comforting your mind, there is no longer thoughts of security. A rose petal glides past a rosie cheek, a gentleness of passion to sweep you off your feet. Though looking down the road, two virgin eyes ponder where the footprints are, the footprints of love to kindle your absence of another. Clouds brush an eventful sky, forming into dreams the imagination thrives upon. For a simple tear glides past the cheek cooling the red cheek as the rememberance of letting go, of anothers hand, to become who the person the mirror shines upon you. Now lost and alone, there is no longer a dream to thrive upon. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Rawk on! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I did not have the opportunity before now, to welcome you to Passions. Glad to read you! Interesting thoughts here...many strong lines. Look forward to reading more. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) This is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, I send heart hugs your way and hope now love has amended in your heart and you have a dream coming true! This is aching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is a nice soft piece of writing, very enjoyable and I voted. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Ali, I felt every single word of this. My vote is also in dear friend, for this is truly a soft, and endearing write.  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I really enjoyed this one and hope more get to read it, and hopefully with this vote of mine they will. Well done! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I see that you hale from the "Land of Misfits"---after having read this lovely poem of yours, I find that extremely hard to believe!  Warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful poem. But it made me sad kind of. I loved your descriptions of everything, though. It's a very good book submission. Hugs, Ethel |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
welcome to pip I look forward to more |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
loved the feel of this, relate so well...definate vote from me! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Alix, I'm thrilled to see you made it into the book. I see Lance made it too. I'm so glad that both of you came over here to Pip and started posting here. Seeing so many of the poets from Sparks come over here and post their wonderful words of verse warms my heart. I know that we were all looking for a place with people who would be warm and welcoming. We sure found it, didn't we?  Congratulations to you my dear friend.  |
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Musicmaker1969
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Very pretty poem. WEll expressed. I'm sure you will do well here. Jesus lives in my heart! |
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