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Mollie963 Junior Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 14 |
A soft pressure at my forehead A trace down my cheek The hold around my waist lets go I hear footsteps walk away I cannot speak To see is to believe So my eyes stay closed What I can't see Cannot be There is still hope I felt your deliberate departure But you couldn't have left me alone I open my eyes Naked reality stands stark and bare You are gone |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Woah. Awesome description melded perfectly with a chill and goosebumps. Good job! -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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