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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-03-26 02:59 PM


TWENTY OR LESS...#114

Copyright 2003 by:MARK V SHELDON


chemist creation

turned against
divine design

no poet

could prepare for


this


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1 posted 2003-03-26 03:00 PM



No.
No one could.

Well done, Sir.

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2 posted 2003-03-26 04:42 PM


I had to re-write my 20 or less a few times, yet you seem to endlessly and effortlessly do them at will... 'Tis truly a gift.
Great write as always.

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John Lennon

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3 posted 2003-03-26 04:53 PM


ah...yes... as usual very well done and something to ponder


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4 posted 2003-03-26 06:06 PM


Indeed.

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5 posted 2003-03-26 06:10 PM


Amen.  Awesome Mark.  Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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6 posted 2003-03-26 06:10 PM


No one, not even a poet..
could prepare for this.
How true Mark..how true.

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dancing with you in the summer rain~

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7 posted 2003-03-26 06:49 PM


Sent chills down my back to read this. How true and sad.
Sandra

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8 posted 2003-03-26 07:20 PM


So much said
There are many things I am unprepared to see
Well defined
Liz

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9 posted 2003-03-26 07:31 PM




Yes, chilling and causes one to wonder.

Enjoyed, Pat

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        "Desiderata"

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10 posted 2003-03-26 09:30 PM


enjoyed
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11 posted 2003-03-26 10:43 PM


You may not have been prepared but you did find the words, Mark..

believe in what your heart feels...

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12 posted 2003-03-26 11:12 PM


MARK - you are a master at these...

BC

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13 posted 2003-03-26 11:25 PM




(sigh) Inevitable...impregnable, and intangible it is, no one can ever twist its movement! (big hugggsssssss) You always have a wonderful way of expressing each marble of pure thought, dearest friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

MARK V SHELDON
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14 posted 2003-03-27 02:39 PM


Sunshine...  there are some things which are not meant to be, let alone prepared for...

Ringo...  I just let the "stream of consciousness" flow into what it will...  Thanks for the nice words and read.

Thank you, Ron.

Kacy...  alas...

Thank you, Chris.

Nancy, I wish it weren't...

Sandra, I know what you mean.

Liz:  yes, and many things which should not be...

Thanks, Pat.

Vandana:  a to you -- may it always grace you...

scorpio:  the words found me...

Bill...  I'm still learning like we all are, but thank you for the compliment.

Thank you, as always, Noah, for your read and input.

-MVS

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