Open Poetry #25 |
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Pinion & Coyote |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Pinion & Coyote Where hills run high Then drop deep into The canyon’s wide yawn Winds slip slowly down into Still and silent graves But there, amid rock and shale That tops the peak Stands in stoop one pinion, as if in Supplicant bow Ne’er straightened by the sun, Barely holding on by root For wind was master Shaping for all time pinion’s limbs In grace-wrought reach It stands solitary, for some crow Had dropped a lone seed., Some rain must have nourished it Once or twice, Some ledge of rock caught its beginning forage Of root to earth On weakest of substance Under harshest conditions Bent and weathered It still stands the test of time For somewhere in the distance As night settles into a lumbering Slumber over The pinion’s horizon A coyote howls From north, south, east Perhaps west And the pinion knows They will greet each other In dawn’s light, Taking pleasure In each other’s brief circle. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-27-2003 02:35 PM).] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...strenth of spirit comes with many different faces, can see it strongly in this beauitful poem. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
And the pinion knows They will greet each other In dawn’s light, Taking pleasure In each other’s brief circle Karilea - this a wonderful piece. You have such an amazing way of putting thoughts on paper. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well where was I at two p.m. when this beauty was posted!!?? Oooh my Karilea...you really shine in this piece. Beautiful sights and sounds filled my senses as I read... One of your best...oh yes!! ![]() ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
As surprised as I am to say this about a 'nature' poem...lol, this is one of the best poems I've read of yours Kari. Very cool. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You, my dear Sun, are a WRITER! ![]() I am always compelled to read on...your descriptive writing draws me into other worlds... Warm beddy-bye hugs, EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Karilea, this one gave me goosebumps ... it goes into my library. I want to reach out and hug this Pinion .... and you for writing such a sparkling gem! I also have written poems about trees ... I love them so! Yours here is a masterpiece. Love and ... hugs. Margherita |
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