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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land 
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Curvaceous it spilled lightly on the wool could see its design: spiralling for the ground the intense burning stare that should melt with one sigh as it dipped and it dripped a pinprick on the skin the hours could drown by till the smell of decadence shied empty glasses lipsticked with-held the hangovered spirit of a flame "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Claire - Welcome to PIP! I love this - so haunting and longing: empty glasses lipsticked with-held the hangovered spirit of a flame Nice entrance - you will love it here xxoo |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesing images...and an interesting piece ot ponder. I found on re-reading I could take it to mean a couple of things at least.. I enjoyed.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ Welcome to Passions~ This is a lovely, lovely write replete with imagery~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Claire, this is just lovely. I don't recall reading it before, but you know me, slipping into senility and all, I could have forgotten  It's a lovely write dear friend, and it certainly gets my vote.  |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
thank you little wing you reply means a lot to me   I really like this site so far |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Cpat Hair thank you so much for your reply, I'm glad you enjoyed it |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Rose! Glad you're here and you saw it... It is a re-post but one I'm quite fond of...  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful poem...full of imagery! Thank you so much for joining, and for sharing! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
marge tindal thank you for your post and making me feel welcome... |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
thank you sunshine I loved the card, i really wasn't expecting it Thank you for your comments...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome to Passions!--the home of passionate people!--passionate about writing and reading poetry --and a host of other things! Enjoyed your first post! Warm, welcoming hugs, Linda |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Welcome to Passions.....lovely write!!!! I really liked the imagery!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions!  Good write here! looking forward to more! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Very nice first post, hope to read more soon. Jason |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes! Love the imagery, and the mood in this ~wranx "The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable" |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The candle drinks deeply.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Wonderful first post.. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very well done, exceptional images and a sumptuous feel. Welcome to Passions. ThisDiamond |
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Pascal Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 54Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful work. I am new to Passions as well but I want to extend my hand of friendship as well and welcome you. Pascal Believe in yourself and wonderous things will happen |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Again, thank you everyone for replying and voting, I've been away for a while so you're kindness has shocked me again :-) Thank you so much for the encouragment... "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I'm glad to see you made it back dear friend.  |
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